Rane wrote:Going from a bright shiny kingdom to an abruptly dark one. It just all seemed so.. rushed I guess would be the way I'd put it.
I think this was going to be a continuous thing, the changing of scenery that is. The world Sugar Bits takes/took place in was one of deep mystery, though predominately run by happy go lucky floating animal Romans with space age technology, I think they were trying to imply that there are many different sides of this universe.
From Happiness, to Sadness, to Anger and so on. In a perfect world with sublime pacing, we could explore all of the aspects of the Sugar Bits world and everything within it. If you want to make a fanfiction on what could have been, try to find and hit up one of the writers for the story and get an inside scoop.
If that doesn't work, just go with your gut. That's what I do with my Fanfiction.