Omomomom!

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The Voice

May the mauling never cease.

Is it just me or has this kerfuffle been going on too long.

I get it, she is distrustful and Primal. Can we move on now? Shit.

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Why do Mimi's legs look like they got amputated in panel 2?

That center panel...the top is heart touching, and the bottom makes me wonder if I should be watching this or not....Bleed reeeaaalllly likes Japanese Hentai huh? Anyways, the look on her face in the center panel is very moving I'd say. I think Bleed hit a good look there.

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And the monkey flips the switch.

I'm guessing its just perspective and distance, after all the only part of her feet you can really see in the last panel are the toes.

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And the monkey flips the switch.

So not the end ?

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I don't accept fandom/shipping/mary-sue

EDIT* Actually laughed at the last panel- and could think of several other things to call Mandy.....





Agreed.





Nope-not yet

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Why is that word censored when it wasn't censored when it was used a few pages ago?

And I agree about the central panel. Mimi's face is very touching.

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That is very cute, cute and DAMN CUTE AHAHAHA

Get'em Mimi! Bite a piece of his skull out!

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Yeah, the "Bitch" word huh, I noticed that too...

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Is she crying just because she misses Jeff? Or because she can't believe Junior can really help her?

... I guess those two thoughts go hand-in-hand...

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Ha ha! That is what I love about this "relationship"! They communicate so well. Junior is willing to lend a sympathetic shoulder and Mimi can show him how much inner hurt she has by giving him an equal amount of outer hurt!

I love how she played all sad and innocent in the centre panel, than the moment he lets go she switches right back to bat-shit mental again.

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(I think her hands are amputated and her feet just have those wrappings for the sake of fashion) XD

POOR JUNIOR. Hope we'll get some sort of thing on Jeff. Can't.... handle..... cliffhangers.....

(Wait wait wait- who's the noob that's just now figuring out how much Bleedman likes hentai? all his comic are like one third anime parody.)

Soooo- next page either more Mimi noming (Get her a bowl of milk or something!) or Minnie might come in.

I was dissapointed it's at the ep. I was expecting some harem-style Minnie and Mimi clawing over Jr. But looks like Minnies taking it too serious for any humor. >.>

She's listening to Matt Hammitt and making things break with the power of her sorrow. That's mayjor angsting there.

If she wasn't stuffed full of dry leafs she might cut herself. I feel so bad for her. >.>

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Consider it Mimi's special way of expressing her grief and anger, she being a mute and all...

EDIT: Fixed. Thanks PP-Grim, I am such a fucking idiot.

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Now that I think about it. That environment really is bad to raise a child in. I mean, it's amazing she was doing so well for so long.

But from what we've seen, I doubt she opens up to...well, anyone. Maybe Jr but since he's part of the problem. Must be quite lonely.

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When did you think Hell was a good place to bring up a child?!

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... I assume you mean Mimi? Not Minnie... Minnie's not mute

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I was expecting a month long break from the end of the last arc.

Eh, I just want to see it progress faster.

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One day this child shall learn the beauty of life.
Absurdum vitae.
Thanks for being there for me, man.

It's you. It's definitely you.

Since it isn't repeating the exact same images, words, etc, I'd have to say it is --how did you put it? Ah, yes-- "moving on". I wasn't aware there was some sort of proscribed pattern or time that this had to follow. And as for me, I enjoy all aspects of these stories, no matter how 'long' or 'short' they may be.

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It was moving on at the part where Mimi showed her tears. Then she continued to go primal and set it back to 2 pages ago.

Never, it just never clicked that it was bloody terrible.

I thought it was okay or something.

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In my opinion, Mimi was brought up rather well.
Yes, her father is an evil sadistic prick and yes, she has experienced pain beyond imagination
but that is where the good is.
She is strong and relatively independent.
She knows of all the evils of the world, so nothing can hurt her, or at least surprise her.
I'm not saying what Him did was right but she has become a better person because of it.

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The most terrible and painful place said to be the home of all suffering and it never clicked that it was that terrible?

Not banging on anything but damn McQuinny, you have got balls of steel, I'll give you that...

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