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Tenshi Nova wrote:Still grammatically incorrect though.
As nice as it is for the story to plan out how and why each event happens, it's being extended to an unreasonable amount.
The last 4 pages could've easily been 1, maybe 2 if they really wanted to stress Chi's cunning.
The physics of Chi's body in the last panel seems off too.
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