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http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/13276433/

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/13407093/

More Cast pages are comin. Unlike Bleedman I reveal all my characters before making the comic so I can have a good idea on who will be in it.

wow, those are pretty good. all my attempts to draw already existing characters are crap, i wanna see them shadded. nice job thou.

eep! what happened to Peach's hair? O_O

but other than that, its good. though they look more like Flash movie characters.

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I messed up Peach hair sorry, but it will look better in the comic. And yes I drew this in flash. (Because P-Shop is to hard to understand to me.)

Well... these characters are better than I could ever do... I think. But... Mario and Luigi look evil, Waluigi looks like somethiing is wrong with him mentally (besides all the things that were already wrong) and somehow... Bowser looks like a chicken... just some thoughts... don't take them seriously if you don't wanna...

And yeah... I find it incredible confusing to use P-shop sometimes... which causes me to use.... MS Paint... Actually... I'm the sort who keeps switching back and forth between the two.

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Yes, THIS is how you do it. To think that you were almost going to give up on the comic. I'm sure even Bleedman started with a few designs and characters to get where he is. We wouldn't be here if he didn't. All you have to do now is keep at it, search for a style that suits you, and evolve it into a some sort of stylistic illustration.