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Postby Numa430 » Mon May 05, 2014 10:43 pm

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Aaaand Boom goes Jack's Sword folks!
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Re: New GT: b!%@#'s b!%@#

Postby Havoc » Mon May 05, 2014 11:02 pm

I don't like where this is going. But I'm gonna try to stay optimistic, and hope for the best.
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Re: New GT: b!%@#'s b!%@#

Postby Sigment » Mon May 05, 2014 11:24 pm

"Strike a pose"? Last thing I want to deal with in GT is some idiot breaking the fourth wall.
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Re: New GT: b!%@#'s b!%@#

Postby Mercen-X » Mon May 05, 2014 11:46 pm

Fourth wall who?

Mandy: (paraphrasing to sound like a nerd) "Grim! Did you take my limited edition Samurai Jack Katana out of its original packaging?" *and boom goes the dynamite*
I just love how people put commas, in places they so obviously, do not belong.

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Re: New GT: b!%@#'s b!%@#

Postby Bandit » Tue May 06, 2014 12:03 am

Sigment wrote:"Strike a pose"? Last thing I want to deal with in GT is some idiot breaking the fourth wall.


That Mandy's opening the door to Grim's chambers...is Obvious.

That half of grim's face looks like a clown...is clever
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Re: New GT: b!%@#'s b!%@#

Postby F.U.N.K V.O.L.U.M.E » Tue May 06, 2014 7:41 am

"...I never thought I'd say this, but I think I feel sorry for the Grim Reaper. She must have broken him"

'Nuff said.

What prevents her from calling it Castle Mandy?
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Postby Tenshi Nova » Tue May 06, 2014 8:27 am

The entire Underworld would sooner call it the Bitch's Keep than Castle Mandy.
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Re: New GT: b!%@#'s b!%@#

Postby F.U.N.K V.O.L.U.M.E » Tue May 06, 2014 9:35 am

Either way, it will be interesting to see what would rein her in
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Re: New GT: b!%@#'s b!%@#

Postby Slendy » Tue May 06, 2014 6:45 pm

I always thought that Grim had manned up again after he married Mandy and thus regained the respect of the underworld. I think he's definitely wary of Mandy and knows not to cross her. But I think he'd be more likely to stand up for himself these days rather than cower at her presence.
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Re: New GT: b!%@#'s b!%@#

Postby Mercen-X » Tue May 06, 2014 6:53 pm

Bandit wrote:That half of grim's face looks like a clown...is clever

Say "huh?"
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Re: New GT: b!%@#'s b!%@#

Postby ari-6 » Tue May 06, 2014 7:03 pm

He must see some pretty weird clowns

Mercen-X wrote: "Grim! Did you take my limited edition Samurai Jack Katana out of its original packaging?" *and boom goes the dynamite*
I actually like the idea of Mandy being an obsessive collector. Rather than thinking of there weapon potential, she is far more concerned with weather something is in mint condition.
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Re: New GT: b!%@#'s b!%@#

Postby Fan_the_Flames » Tue May 06, 2014 7:24 pm

Slendy wrote:I always thought that Grim had manned up again after he married Mandy and thus regained the respect of the underworld. I think he's definitely wary of Mandy and knows not to cross her. But I think he'd be more likely to stand up for himself these days rather than cower at her presence.


I really don't think so. Even in the show he was the laughingstock of the Underworld for losing his freedom to two kids in a game of Limbo. Just because he was able to build up the courage to reap Mandy's soul once, doesn't mean he's completely manned up again. I mean, Mandy basically runs Castle Grimskull, Grim was (or is, can't tell) a cuckold while Mandy decides to sleep with other members of the Underworld, and he let Dark Danny walk all over him during Mimi's original invasion. He can get angry when he wants to be, but he still isn't willing to completely cross Mandy.

As for the actual page, I made my comments clear in another topic. Half of the page is completely wasted, and the reveal of what happened to the sword/Him essence could have been done here. I've been here almost 6 months, and the main story of GT hasn't moved at all. Along with Mandy's reveal being fairly underwhelming, this is more annoying than anger inducing.
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Re: New GT: b!%@#'s b!%@#

Postby Ruxan Kikilin » Fri May 09, 2014 1:00 pm

Mandy really bothers me in this page. She looks very... off model. Stiff, kind of masculine. She appears like that in some pages, but not this bad.

That's some pretty straight legs she has there...

As for the story I'm just gotta pass on giving my opinion here. Don't have much to say since I stopped caring a long while back.
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Re: New GT: b!%@#'s b!%@#

Postby Havoc » Fri May 09, 2014 1:23 pm

Well Mandy's always been fairly "masculine". But I do agree with you that she's seems way too static here. I can't really get the image in my head that she walked to the door. It would have been a little better if they at least drew her mid-step in one panel.

As for the story, I'm almost at the same point you are. My interest in this comic is hanging by a thread.
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Re: New GT: b!%@#'s b!%@#

Postby Blood Lord » Fri May 09, 2014 4:01 pm

Hmm. Looking at the art work again, it does seemed forced, and sloppy.
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Re: New GT: b!%@#'s b!%@#

Postby GrimlyLoveGunner » Sun May 11, 2014 1:17 pm

You know what? I think it's her hair that's doing that. It's stiff/sharp.

She's also looking alittle thick....... preggo.

I see the clown. 8D It's weird that such a clever detail was interwoven with a rushed, chubby Mandy.
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Re: New GT: b!%@#'s b!%@#

Postby Sigment » Sun May 11, 2014 1:30 pm

In the last couple panels, her legs look... I dunno, simple? Feels like a distinct lack of effort there.
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Re: New GT: b!%@#'s b!%@#

Postby Lady Haru » Mon May 12, 2014 11:22 pm

i feel it might be because Bleed isn't used to drawing adult women
women are shapely and curved where as he for the most part draws little girls and creatures
he's not well practiced with drawing adult women, i think
and Mandy has almost always been drawn a bit off, in my opinion
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Re: New GT: b!%@#'s b!%@#

Postby Tenshi Nova » Tue May 13, 2014 5:14 am

Compare this page with all of Mandy's other shots. Even the pups and Mandy's vault entrance seem rushed.
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Re: New GT: b!%@#'s b!%@#

Postby Lady Haru » Tue May 13, 2014 6:22 am

yea, i still quite dislike the last two panels
the last panel is too goofy looking
i think Mandy would have a more serious aura about her
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Re: New GT: b!%@#'s b!%@#

Postby ari-6 » Wed May 14, 2014 2:12 am

I found him to be nothing but annoying. When he first appeared, it was at a point when things were fairly fast paced. Then he takes up two updates. The story would have been just fine if he were removed entirely.

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