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PostPosted: Sun Sep 26, 2004 8:10 am 

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Mandy our smarted the Grim Reaper into becoming her best friend (slave.)

Mandy -out- not -our-

and otto's

He know history better than anyone in school

He -know's-

just saying :/


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PostPosted: Sun Sep 26, 2004 12:32 pm 
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Thanks man I'll fix those typos right now. Any others you saw?

and welcome to the forums.

and their fixed.

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Dave wrote:
and their fixed.


See, that's why there's typos everywhere in that cast page. ^_^

Oh, and actually...

jz wrote:
He know history better than anyone in school

He -know's-

It's just "knows." There's no apostrophe.

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Blossom - cool-headed (needs a hyphen)
Dexter - although weak and clumsy on the outside, (needs a comma)
Jack - kind-hearted (needs a hyphen)
"Jack has a strong sense of justice and a kind heart make him a timeless hero." should be
"Jack has a strong sense of justice and his kind heart makes him a timeless hero. "(pronoun issue, subject-verb agreement)
Bell - "over throw" -> "overthrow"
"niave" -> "naivé"
Courage - "can" should be capitalized, "but despite" is repetitive, remove one
Mandy - "out smarted" -> "outsmarted", and some comma issues toward the end
Gaz - "strong willed" -> "strong-willed"
"prefering" -> "preferring

That's all that I found.

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Wow.

Ok even I'm not that anal. ^_^

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yeah i don't know why i did that - thanks DJ

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