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Re: Just Du It

Tue Jan 17, 2012 11:04 pm

Gotta love memory lane.

Re: Just Du It

Wed Jan 18, 2012 12:00 am

thanks gato. and also who are the writers? if u could help me there that would be great

Re: Just Du It

Wed Jan 18, 2012 12:34 am

BeeAre and Griddles I know are for sure.

Re: Just Du It

Wed Jan 18, 2012 3:57 am

That was a good episode...

Re: Just Du It

Wed Jan 18, 2012 6:20 pm

Thanks Gato

Re: Just Du It

Wed Jan 18, 2012 7:08 pm

Hey Guys here's my story i have written so far. Please go easy on me im just a 12yr old that cant really write that well (im still learning). Also i included the Bleedman version of how Junior got is powers so credit goes to him, griddles and BeeArt. Well here you go!

Grim Tales: Crossroads of Destiny
“Minnie, Minnie!? Where are you?” said Junior. “Hey there. My name is Grim Junior and I’m the son of the current Grim Reaper. You might be wondering about many things like who is Minnie and why do I look like this, to answer who is Minnie well that’s very simple: Minnie is my little sister (well technically half-sister) but why I look like this is well…… a long story. I could give you the long and boring version but I'm sure the short and easier to understand version better.” *3 years go* “The story starts out as me celebrating my first Halloween with my Uncle Jack and Aunt Sally with my family Mini Mandy (Minnie), my mom Mandy and my dad Grim. While there I got kidnapped and was taken hostage by the Oogie Boogie man and my sister came to rescue me but only ended up dead. She had offered me her eye to gain her power which I did but that was only the beginning. She was taken away from me and well….. I lost control. After I woke up I found that I was in my human form and found out that my sister had been taken by a demon called by the name of “Him”. Then I met my friends Mimi and Jeff and they seemed like good people but they weren’t. To shorten up the story I found my sister, escaped Hell and got out. But I had to leave Mimi and Jeff. When I returned the demon I had left behind had begun destroying everything and when I got control of it again I almost killed everyone but my sister stopped me. My Uncle Jack and Aunt Sally made a new body for my sister and I put her soul back into it. Now back to the story”

Junior: Minnie?! Where are you?!
Minnie: Over here brother……
Junior: Thank the underworld I found you; where have you been?
Minnie: Oh just wondering around….. Looking for thee
Junior: Oh ok then….. Well come up to the study dad wants to see us
Minnie: Surely brother, I shouldn’t keep thee and thine father waiting…….
Junior: Are you ok Minnie? You don’t sound ok…
Minnie: (insane voice) I’m fine dearest brother I just want….. you to DIE!!!! (She then lunges at Junior with a dagger and she stabs him)
Junior: (breathing heavily clutching chest)…. What…. was that about that’s the second time that’s happened to me……

Re: Just Du It

Wed Jan 18, 2012 7:51 pm

grimjr_1234567890 wrote:Hey Guys here's my story i have written so far. Please go easy on me im just a 12yr old that cant really write that well (im still learning). Also i included the Bleedman version of how Junior got is powers so credit goes to him, griddles and BeeArt. Well here you go!

Grim Tales: Crossroads of Destiny
“Minnie, Minnie!? Where are you?” said Junior. “Hey there. My name is Grim Junior and I’m the son of the current Grim Reaper. You might be wondering about many things like who is Minnie and why do I look like this, to answer who is Minnie well that’s very simple: Minnie is my little sister (well technically half-sister) but why I look like this is well…… a long story. I could give you the long and boring version but I'm sure the short and easier to understand version better.” *3 years go* “The story starts out as me celebrating my first Halloween with my Uncle Jack and Aunt Sally with my family Mini Mandy (Minnie), my mom Mandy and my dad Grim. While there I got kidnapped and was taken hostage by the Oogie Boogie man and my sister came to rescue me but only ended up dead. She had offered me her eye to gain her power which I did but that was only the beginning. She was taken away from me and well….. I lost control. After I woke up I found that I was in my human form and found out that my sister had been taken by a demon called by the name of “Him”. Then I met my friends Mimi and Jeff and they seemed like good people but they weren’t. To shorten up the story I found my sister, escaped Hell and got out. But I had to leave Mimi and Jeff. When I returned the demon I had left behind had begun destroying everything and when I got control of it again I almost killed everyone but my sister stopped me. My Uncle Jack and Aunt Sally made a new body for my sister and I put her soul back into it. Now back to the story”

Junior: Minnie?! Where are you?!
Minnie: Over here brother……
Junior: Thank the underworld I found you; where have you been?
Minnie: Oh just wondering around….. Looking for thee
Junior: Oh ok then….. Well come up to the study dad wants to see us
Minnie: Surely brother, I shouldn’t keep thee and thine father waiting…….
Junior: Are you ok Minnie? You don’t sound ok…
Minnie: (insane voice) I’m fine dearest brother I just want….. you to DIE!!!! (She then lunges at Junior with a dagger and she stabs him)
Junior: (breathing heavily clutching chest)…. What…. was that about that’s the second time that’s happened to me……


Not bad. It's sounding good.

Re: Just Du It

Wed Jan 18, 2012 8:28 pm

An all right endeavor, but do be careful not to double post in the future. There is also a topic and or forum for fanfics specifically.

Re: Just Du It

Wed Jan 18, 2012 9:25 pm

Thanks and where or what is the forum called?

Re: Just Du It

Wed Jan 18, 2012 11:15 pm

Try the Literature forum. :/ Also, that kind of writing isn't really allowed per the Lit forum rules. I know firsthand.

Re: Just Du It

Wed Jan 18, 2012 11:19 pm

like how do u mean mathias?

Re: Just Du It

Wed Jan 18, 2012 11:23 pm

grimjr_1234567890 wrote:Junior: Minnie?! Where are you?!
Minnie: Over here brother……
Junior: Thank the underworld I found you; where have you been?
Minnie: Oh just wondering around….. Looking for thee
Junior: Oh ok then….. Well come up to the study dad wants to see us
Minnie: Surely brother, I shouldn’t keep thee and thine father waiting…….
Junior: Are you ok Minnie? You don’t sound ok…
Minnie: (insane voice) I’m fine dearest brother I just want….. you to DIE!!!! (She then lunges at Junior with a dagger and she stabs him)
Junior: (breathing heavily clutching chest)…. What…. was that about that’s the second time that’s happened to me……

This. The playwriting. I used to write like this all the time before I had to learn how to tag properly. Yes, it's easier, especially between two people, and I still have trouble with it, but using proper quotation is what you need. "Dialogue dialogue," he said.
Be sure to read the rules in the Literature sub-forum.

Re: Just Du It

Wed Jan 18, 2012 11:28 pm

allright thanks. and Mr. Cole (just in case) i am very sorry for how i posted this peice. i was sorta half awake when i posted this so i forgot to read the rules. also im new to this type of forum so please forgive me. in the future i will follow your guidelines that you have posted

Re: Just Du It

Wed Jan 18, 2012 11:30 pm

I don't think he'll see this post. He doesn't come into News and he hasn't been seen for ages.

Re: Just Du It

Wed Jan 18, 2012 11:37 pm

Ah ok then and sorry about how slow im responding because im using my phon to check these messagesa also thanks. If u dont mind could u tell me if my story is any god so far?

Re: Just Du It

Wed Jan 18, 2012 11:48 pm

I haven't read it. I'm not a fan of the comic, either.

Re: Just Du It

Thu Jan 19, 2012 8:18 am

Ah ok

Re: Just Du It

Thu Jan 19, 2012 6:54 pm

i read it and i like it grimjr. i would like to read the whole thing when your done. :)

Re: Just Du It

Thu Jan 19, 2012 7:30 pm

ahh sweet sweet nostalgia how i love you

Re: Just Du It

Fri Jan 20, 2012 12:41 pm

good thing i took french fr two years lol there is a vocab difference does the omelet have cheese on top or inside? Omelette du fromage (omelette of cheese) or Omelette au fromage (omelet with cheese) lol it's just how you learn it lol
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Reason: please read the rules. colored text in normal posts is a bad idea.

Re: Just Du It

Sat Jan 21, 2012 6:01 pm

Thanks darknesavandeath

Re: Just Du It

Sun Jan 22, 2012 1:01 am

by the way what type of musle is dex bringing?

a. the super monkey
b. his mech suit
c. a new invention
d. none of the above

Re: Just Du It

Sun Jan 22, 2012 1:02 am

I would say c darkness

Re: Just Du It

Sun Jan 22, 2012 5:06 am

omelet du promage... my....my....

Re: Just Du It

Sun Jan 22, 2012 8:23 pm

Unless I'm remembering something differently, isn't that the story from here, grimjr? I know BeeAre and Bleedman are violating multiple copyrights themselves, but seriously be careful so you're not accused of stealing their original characters as well.

I would say Dex is getting Bubbles. In a way it's too bad he didn't bring any gadgets with firepower, but it's also a good thing because he's not carrying anything the Cluster can control.

"[Sensors online. Four energies detected. Searching for library matches. Found one. Two. Three. Identifying as Powerpuff_Bell, Powerpuff_Blossom, and Powerpuff_Buttercup. Attempting to classify fourth energy source... attempt failed.]"

It's the 'bomb,' by the way. The reason it's not Samantha is because she would not have an energy signature on the same level as a Powerpuff. But, depending on what it does, the bomb might.
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