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Re: Gaz On The Flame

Tue Oct 19, 2010 7:42 pm

I feel like folks just kind of tired with the Dexter and Olga thing and decided to phone the rest in. I suppose it's off to the next big buildup.

Re: Gaz On The Flame

Wed Oct 20, 2010 1:47 am

So why couldn't we have moved it along with a short scene at the beach instead of just summarizing it in one page after the entire trip? It all just seemed unnecessary with how it was executed.

Re: Gaz On The Flame

Wed Oct 20, 2010 4:30 am

pwned-by-twilight wrote:Well, as I was saying to BeeAre about the last page being anticlimactic, that's just not right. There was too much build up and speculation for how it was done. An anti-climax is supposed to give the reader that "Oh wow, wasn't expecting that" feeling, but it just went and slapped the reader in the face in my opinion. It's like if someone wrote a 100 page essay, and it's pretty good, but then rushes the 4 page closing for no apparent reason.


You expected the build-up to be released. I did not release it. You, therefore, have not experienced an anti-climax, but another part of the progression. I point to the obvious: the comic is not even near over.

Again if there's no explanation or clarification for why this was what it was, it just won't sit well with me. And on TOP of that, there's a grave error in speech that wasn't given a response in the post I gave.


Grave error in speech? There was no error: Bubbles heard Blossom and Dexter and Olga speaking, and that subject came up.

But moving onto THIS page, it's nice, yes. The speculation that this page is a tie-in to the Zim comic Johnny brought up is a good question though... Is it a tie in?


No tie ins to any other comics are present which would convey that they exist in the same universe.

So why couldn't we have moved it along with a short scene at the beach instead of just summarizing it in one page after the entire trip? It all just seemed unnecessary with how it was executed.


That WAS the short scene at the beach. And believe me, it was definitely necessary. :)

Re: Gaz On The Flame

Wed Oct 20, 2010 4:24 pm

Ntoonz wrote:I feel like folks just kind of tired with the Dexter and Olga thing and decided to phone the rest in. I suppose it's off to the next big buildup.

I agree. But when you think about it, besides the Olga/Dexter incident there isn't really much to look forward to...there's Naga and Bell but that's going nowhere at this point.

Re: Gaz On The Flame

Wed Oct 20, 2010 9:55 pm

I'm glad to see there are finally updates~
Also happeh to see Dib in the doujinshi... Although I hope he's not a love interest for Bubbles... that wouldn't be fitting... at least that's what I think. x_o

I was kinda looking forward to more beach-related pages, but the short summary and Gaz's fury made up for it. :3

*cannot wait for future updates* 8D

Re: Gaz On The Flame

Thu Oct 21, 2010 12:15 pm

I'm new to this site so i don't know how everything works here

Re: Gaz On The Flame

Thu Oct 21, 2010 12:28 pm

then please read the rules.

Re: Gaz On The Flame

Thu Oct 21, 2010 7:50 pm

BLEEDMAN!!!! I have missed you!!!! I can't wait to read some of your new chapters for PPG!!! hope you can add more to The Grim Tales from Down Below!!!! Welcome Back!!! d>w<b

Re: Gaz On The Flame

Thu Oct 21, 2010 10:29 pm

1. Bleedman does not visit the forums and will never read your posts
2. Grim Tales is done
3. if you want more story, buy After Birth
4. Odontophobia is the fear of teeth.

Re: Gaz On The Flame

Fri Oct 22, 2010 1:40 am

shouldn't we wait until the story is over before we decide whether a chapter was executed well or not?

Re: Gaz On The Flame

Fri Oct 22, 2010 6:49 am

JesusChrist wrote:shouldn't we wait until the story is over before we decide whether a chapter was executed well or not?


dude if you had waited until after you'd come back from the dead to see if you were executed well would your big moment with Thomas and the holes in your hands mean anything????

maybe i rest my case.

Re: Gaz On The Flame

Fri Oct 22, 2010 10:48 pm

hello people, I am a new member of the forum! (I don't find topic for presentations here so greeting)
I am Invasora Snape, have 22 years old and am from Cordoba, Argentina (yes, am foreign, like Rolf! XD)
I adore that doujin and it seems to me one of the best ones than law
finally, it appeared Dib! I thought that it was not going to never appear… but it would love to me that sees zim with that… that… maid suit Image
I want that ed, edd and eddy returns to appear in doujinshi! they forgot them completely and are personages whit a lot of potential!

Re: Gaz On The Flame

Fri Oct 22, 2010 10:59 pm

AH! Bloody Crap! I wish I was on sooner and I would've seen this. Bloody Hell!

Well, anyway, Dib's doomed.

Oh, and welcome to SNAFU, Snape!

Re: Gaz On The Flame

Wed Nov 10, 2010 5:46 pm

HOMG!!!!IS THAT PANTY AND STOCKING I SEE IN THE BACKGROUD?!?!?!?!?!?!? :eek:

Re: Gaz On The Flame

Thu Nov 11, 2010 12:44 am

don't post in old comic threads, thanks.
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