Hello everybody! My name is Dedmerath and from now on I will be hanging around here, on Snafu. As you can tell, my comic is about Naruto, and it's settled well after the current events of the original story. Of course, there will be a LOT of differences with Kishimoto's work as his comic progresses, but please bear with that. You will just have to assume that they defeated the Akatsuki and everyone is happy, or something along those lines.

I'm kinda embarrassed with the first pages too... I did them quite a while ago, so when i see the text and artwork i really think they are awful... But, oh well, I'm sure you all will help me improve a lot.

See ya around!
Dedmerath.

nice to see new artist. Welcome to the Clan that is snafu. Your art is cool so far and if this is your old stuff I can't wait for the new.

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Welcome to Snafu.

So far the comic is interesting, but I will save my final judgement for when you get a couple pages out.

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omg hi i love naruto stuff in my anime im naruto sister dei and my father is the 4th hokage and stuff

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Finally a Naruto webcomic that doesn't look like it's going to be utter crap.
You better not let down my expections.
>:/

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its always great to see new people and new comics as well...

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OMG a naruto fan-comic! thats new! (sarcasm)

Lol just kidding i love the series

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OMG!!! It's Dedmerath from deviantART Been a big fan, and I can't wait to see more of your work here on Snafu ^^

P.S. Did Dave invite you here, or did you just sneak by security leave this bundled page of joy for us ?

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awesome job so far!

hey, I was wondering..

how did you get to join Snafu-comics?
(like, add your won series?)

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BLEEDMAN IS AWESOME!

yay how?*i really really want 2 be in ur anime*

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alrighty, i'm new to this, but I figured that if someone thinks they stink, with this piece of artwork, is another great artist not trusting his/her skill. please keep up the good work, dedmerath ^^

hopefully your storytelling skills are not as generic as with the series.


As bloodlord said i'll wait to see more before being a total asshole about it

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Hi not sure if you got my other one it might not have sent if it did please destroy this as soon as you read this

Anyway if not here it is

my ninja is a smart tencnical guy that is cursed with a demon because of his ansesters. He has a curse-mark on his back in a green ink-like substance. He can't talk to people much he is very tecnical he takes everything so real. His friends (no idea who, up to you) try to help him with a crush he has been nursing since the acadmy. he has a blond sister that is also cursed and is very emotional. theres ups theres downs but most of all theres lots of fun to enjoy trying to get his crush (by the way the crush could be anyone, but he loves red hair

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I also love anime my fav. Is bleach,
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Post some more details of your guy here.
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Dusk_Imp - Blood Lord is like a celebrity here. Everything he does is pure awesome. ALL HAIL BLOOD LORD
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Snafu's Mercypostle.

welcome to snafu
so far your comic is great
big naruto fan
don't srew it up
but you'll have to publish more pages for all of our judgement

Your welcome hopefully you enjoy and stay in this place well.

your pretty lucky y'know....
your comic's on a very popular site, while mine is still sitting on my DeviantArt gallery.
I really want to have my comic on this site.... but I guess I got beat. ^^

P.S: how did you get your comic on Snafu?

Hi, i'd like to see more of this comic, i'm a huge fan of Naruto.... The speech bubbles weren't that bad too

With wisdom,
Luna


P.S. i was also wondering if i could get you to do me a favor....

... I'm at a loss for words.

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Why would you waste your time on a Naruto fanfic?

(Edit: I reaaalllly don't mean to be rude but looking at your art you could do soooo much better /:)

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Welcome to Snafu. I Look forward to seeing your work.

Welcome to the forums.I think I know you.Arn't you from deviant art?

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cool~ i nver expected someone to do a comic ill be looking forward to your comic ^^

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watch for the new comics :p
Invader zim comic of my friend ^^ http://fire-bird9.deviantart.com/galler ... an-comic-1 this is so funny and cool

So many new people,

RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGE

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Ungh... the idea isn't striking me nice too much but I enjoy how you draw. I think on the sidelines of the comic (like the others) show Lee, Neji, and Hinata in some sort of older versions. Will all the rest of the Rookie 12 be shown (like Tenten or Shino)?
And you killed the Akatsuki? WTF? Darnit.

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