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Go check out the new Naruto: Heroes Path comic!



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PostPosted: Tue Jun 30, 2009 9:58 pm 
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I, for one, am enjoying this piece of fan fiction and cheer when it updates.

YAY!

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 30, 2009 10:11 pm 
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damnit I forgot an O on the word too. :[

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damnit I forgot an O on the word too. :[



Your grammar seemed accurate to me.

You would use "too" like you would use the word "also".
As in "I too would like a candy bar."

Your wording in the comic was spot on.

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Nice update and....

Ohhhhhhhhhh Atsuko have a Boyfriend........ 8)

I like how naruto threaten the other boy..... What's he's name again?

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BeeAre wrote:
damnit I forgot an O on the word too. :[



Your grammar seemed accurate to me.

You would use "too" like you would use the word "also".
As in "I too would like a candy bar."

Your wording in the comic was spot on.


No it wasn't, he did forget an 'o'.

I'm liking this comic so far, it's quickly becoming a favorite of mine.

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Nice update and....

Ohhhhhhhhhh Atsuko have a Boyfriend........ 8)

I like how naruto threaten the other boy..... What's he's name again?



Kabuki, at least he's smart.

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Im liking this too surprisingly, and Im not much a fan of naruto.

Just love the art


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It's still holding my attention, seems there's more improvement on the art, the chibi's crack me up

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like a true father he puts the fear of death into him....good thing i never had to deal with that...ever

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like a true father he puts the fear of death into him....good thing i never had to deal with that...ever


It's one thing to put the fear of death in someone, it's another to know that it isn't an idle threat.

I'm also liking this. I see Naruto as a good concept, but it just got submarined by the gobs of filler it was dumped with. I'm interested to see where someone who potentially has a more competent storytelling ability will take it.


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Well, I guess it is official. Naruto is... what ever the hell he wanted to be...

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Ah yes, I'm surprised at how well Atsuko came out, she's cute =3

Also....I do believe that Naruto has the power to do such a thing to Kabuki....to whom I feel bad for...somewhat

also since i couldn't find the previous thread ....Atsuko's breasts....are as big as her mothers


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The question is, will we see Naruto in    "Sage Mode"    in this fan fiction?

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In what?!!

Incidentally, am I incorrect in seeing Kabuki as more of a body guard? The reasons are two fold:

1) IF Kabuki WAS Atsuko's boyfriend, Naruto's phrasing would be much different, such as: "And remember, if you get to close to Atsuko..."
2) Kabuki's body language and speech do not reflect any special intimacy with Atsuko.

Open for discussion.

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Sorry, to clarify: I'm wondering if the author read the Naruto manga up until its current incarnation before writing/drawing the comic as to incorporate greatest range of Naruto's abilities (that are labeled with spoiler tabs as not everyone reads the manga).

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I am really liking this series, a little bit more then the actual Naruto. Not that Naruto is bad or anything it is just I like it better because it really is different like a whole new story for Naruto with a family and a life instead of him obsessing over Sasuke (WAY too many Yaoi of that). I also would make a suggestion. could you cut Atsuko's hair to be like how she looks when she was a teenager (I think it is teen), she just looks cuter.

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also since i couldn't find the previous thread ....Atsuko's breasts....are as big as her mothers


Ya well when Hinata (again, pretty sure it is her) was a teen she had huge breasts as well, runs in the family? I really wish they didn't make the breasts the size of Mars though because of the fact that it just seems unrealistic, just keep them average.

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I like her with crazy long hair myself


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I suppose that you are right....but honestly.... is there infact a standard breast size for women? i keep thinking that there isn't one

either way, i'm sure that Atsuko "wants" something ot happen between her and Kabuki


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In what?!!

Incidentally, am I incorrect in seeing Kabuki as more of a body guard? The reasons are two fold:

1) IF Kabuki WAS Atsuko's boyfriend, Naruto's phrasing would be much different, such as: "And remember, if you get to close to Atsuko..."
2) Kabuki's body language and speech do not reflect any special intimacy with Atsuko.

Open for discussion.


you are correct Dedmerath and I have arranged to replace the page with a slight dialogue edit that at once corrects my mistake and makes it more clear that Kabuki is a family friend and not the potential love interest

I didn't actually get to see this particular page before I edited the dialogue--so I didn't see the intensity of the last panel, or I would have been clearer.

My little mistake is a happy accident as a result~

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In what?!!

Incidentally, am I incorrect in seeing Kabuki as more of a body guard? The reasons are two fold:

1) IF Kabuki WAS Atsuko's boyfriend, Naruto's phrasing would be much different, such as: "And remember, if you get to close to Atsuko..."
2) Kabuki's body language and speech do not reflect any special intimacy with Atsuko.

Open for discussion.



I guess you right. I think that he is the son of Neji (?) I'm speculating, 'Cause he look like Neji...and he had the same eyes of aTSUKO, nEJI, hINATA...AND ALL THE hYUUGAS.
Well that's my opinion :mrgreen:

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I suppose that you are right....but honestly.... is there infact a standard breast size for women? i keep thinking that there isn't one

either way, i'm sure that Atsuko "wants" something ot happen between her and Kabuki


I estimate on average a large C to a small D, could be less, I ain't a breast expert, I just go by experience... wait... that sounds kinda different then what I was thinking...

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I guess you right. I think that he is the son of Neji (?) I'm speculating, 'Cause he look like Neji...and he had the same eyes of aTSUKO, nEJI, hINATA...AND ALL THE hYUUGAS.
Well that's my opinion :mrgreen:


Good theory but I kind of doubt that, the eyes might really just be coincidence because sometimes a small detail on the eyes might be overlooked and this could be the case. Also I don't think that they would put in a lovey dovey type deal with two relatives. Neji is the cousin of Hinata after all. Also I don't think they (Kabuki and Atsuko) aren't as far apart on the family tree to not be considered related or even close to be frank.

P.S. why do people use "frank" when they say "to be frank" or "frankly?" I mean, why not Joe or even Bob. I would love saying "blah blah blah to be bob." That sounds much better

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well, to be bob, i think it's a matter of habit... lol or maybe it's an active conspiracy to make u trust all the frank's in the world... ¬¬

On the breast thing, as in is there such a thing as standard size or not, I'm told it depends on how standard it is to go to a plastic surgeon.. :twisted: hehehehe!

All kidding aside, there is a standard as far as I know, but it changes depending on the country and all that... so maybe, yeah, there isn't a standard... :s


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glad to see that naruto hasent lost his since of houmer since the time he was a kid to the present time

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They're cousins though, why would Naruto get all fatherly?

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