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Re: POETRY DUEL

Postby craig911 » Sun May 14, 2006 12:49 am

Thanks Mir@k.
Thanks Ku. ^_^
Everyone in this list...I shall miss with all my heart.
CarrionMan,Erix,Whispersoul,Miss Redhead,APE,narutodesu,SpellRuler,wickedali, PPGD Fan, Kyle,~Gaara's Little Angel~,TheCoosinator,DarkDragon_DEK, The.Time.Lord., Hiryu.

Farewell.
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Postby Ku Ku Ku \(-^.^-)/ » Sun May 14, 2006 12:50 am

ur welcome
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Postby CarrionMan » Sun May 14, 2006 12:50 am

Make your posts poetic.
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Postby Ku Ku Ku \(-^.^-)/ » Sun May 14, 2006 12:51 am

...aw.
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Postby Mirak's Mod Ghost » Sun May 14, 2006 12:51 am

Hey, are you sure you made that?
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Postby Ku Ku Ku \(-^.^-)/ » Sun May 14, 2006 12:52 am

lol
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Re: POETRY DUEL

Postby craig911 » Sun May 14, 2006 12:53 am

Okay then...
Pool Of Tears
All alone in a pool of tears,you yourself is shunned
by your peers,nobody to look out for,nobody to
care,nobody no more,nobody is there,the pool of
tears as crimson as blood,the pain and the
suffering of being kicked at to some mud...no one
actually cares life is all a dream,a dream of
hardship--friends and peers you call your team,but
all this is just a whole big scam,no one is there its
as bad as spam,you may feel happy at times in
your life,but this happiness may only lead you to
strife. So thats what I have to say in my life gone
array,no reason anymore to stay in year's time I'll
die anyway...

Yes I'm sure I made that.
Everyone in this list...I shall miss with all my heart.
CarrionMan,Erix,Whispersoul,Miss Redhead,APE,narutodesu,SpellRuler,wickedali, PPGD Fan, Kyle,~Gaara's Little Angel~,TheCoosinator,DarkDragon_DEK, The.Time.Lord., Hiryu.

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Postby Ku Ku Ku \(-^.^-)/ » Sun May 14, 2006 12:53 am

...u sure?
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Re: POETRY DUEL

Postby craig911 » Sun May 14, 2006 12:54 am

Yep I made em a long time ago in another discussion board I go to.
I also put them in a bulletin board and in my notebook.
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Postby Ku Ku Ku \(-^.^-)/ » Sun May 14, 2006 12:55 am

...ok
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Postby Mirak's Mod Ghost » Sun May 14, 2006 12:56 am

OMFG! we have 8 pages now? O_O
i never believed i should go so far in one of my threads!!!

Ah, yes, Carrion, your right!

"Oh, holy mother of Jenova!
what is what thou seek?
immortality?
no, is something else...
love... peace... family...
these can be get in no time,
make sure you got prepared..
soon you'll be in a world
of wich almost anyone has been before...
see, your dream can be found
BY yourselve!
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Postby Ku Ku Ku \(-^.^-)/ » Sun May 14, 2006 12:57 am

lol yay great poems u guys have...man i wish i could write good peoms.
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Postby Mirak's Mod Ghost » Sun May 14, 2006 1:00 am

Everyone can, even you, try thinking of something pretty or that makes you feel warm and fuzzy, like water caverns or minerals, of jewels...

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Re: POETRY DUEL

Postby craig911 » Sun May 14, 2006 1:00 am

I Like To See It Lap The Miles

I like to see it lap the miles,
And lick the valleys up,
And stop to feed itself at tanks;
And then, prodigious, step

Around a pile of mountains,
And, supercilious, peer
In shanties by the sides of roads;
And then a quarry pare

To fit its sides, and crawl between,
Complaining all the while
In horrid, hooting stanza;
Then chase itself down hill

And neigh like Boanerges;
Then, punctual as a star,
Stop - docile and omnipotent
At its own stable door.
Everyone in this list...I shall miss with all my heart.
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Postby Ku Ku Ku \(-^.^-)/ » Sun May 14, 2006 1:03 am

There are billions of people in the world, yet I feel like I'm alone
And all I try to do is right, but everyone seems to treat me wrong
So I lash out in rage, but what I say is never heard
Because I've learned to turn my cheek and swallow all these hateful words
But I'm getting tired now and I can only take so much
Because with everything that happens my soul is slowly being touched
So I make others laugh just to escape all my pain
But every time I'm down no one's there to do the same
So I sit back and relax, while I nurse all my wounds
As I lay terribly depressed in a dark solemn room
Somehow this little balled up aggression
Is slowly changing into an even bigger depression
Something I can't take and can't shake
And eats away with every second
I've now acquired too many emotions to ever explain
It feels like there's demons as well as angels fighting for control of my pain
And for some strange reason my heart is being pulled in opposite directions
One has the side of good and the other knows no affection
And I can't explain the way I feel, I just know I feel this way
From the second that I wake, till the time I end my day
Although I enjoy life and try my best to learn it's lessons
I just wish someone could teach me to escape this Great Depression

hey i was searching for this. I remember doing tis for a class assignment i had,
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Postby Mirak's Mod Ghost » Sun May 14, 2006 1:03 am

Hey, give Ku Ku Ku an opportunity, wht does say al?

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Re: POETRY DUEL

Postby craig911 » Sun May 14, 2006 1:04 am

Good poem Ku, too bad you searched for it .
You would make a good poet if you tried...
Go, try. ^_^
Everyone in this list...I shall miss with all my heart.
CarrionMan,Erix,Whispersoul,Miss Redhead,APE,narutodesu,SpellRuler,wickedali, PPGD Fan, Kyle,~Gaara's Little Angel~,TheCoosinator,DarkDragon_DEK, The.Time.Lord., Hiryu.

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Postby Ku Ku Ku \(-^.^-)/ » Sun May 14, 2006 1:06 am

yay
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Postby Mirak's Mod Ghost » Sun May 14, 2006 1:14 am

go ahead, we're waiting ;)

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Postby Ku Ku Ku \(-^.^-)/ » Sun May 14, 2006 1:14 am

...uhm im scared.
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Postby Mirak's Mod Ghost » Sun May 14, 2006 1:17 am

:hug:
you'll do fine, you have my blessing
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Postby Ku Ku Ku \(-^.^-)/ » Sun May 14, 2006 1:19 am

the fact tat i'm still shoked at wat i saw in the stuff my brother has is still freaking me out.
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Postby Mirak's Mod Ghost » Sun May 14, 2006 1:29 am

i coulnd't sleep in two weeks, consider yourslef lucky, my case was so much worse...
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Postby Ku Ku Ku \(-^.^-)/ » Sun May 14, 2006 1:31 am

...wat happend?
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Postby CarrionMan » Sun May 14, 2006 1:33 am

No poems for my brain has stopped
My shoulders drooped, my head slopped.
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