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POETRY DUEL

Postby Mirak's Mod Ghost » Sat May 13, 2006 3:25 am

OK, THIS was exclusively for Craigg and me, but anyone that wants take this seriously, you can enter, i beg that you start with some short ones, let's begin...

Ahem...


"In this city, wich i call the realm of the never ending rain,
there's something that appears in the shadows of the clouds,
what can this be?
is this just an illusion of hopes and dreams?
is it the faint call of love that flows within my veins?
or the anger in my soul, consuming me?
these are thing i should know, yet that knowledge...
im sure, that watching the rain,
my worries, no, my feelings will be clear to me,
and for all the people that cares for each other..."
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Re: POETRY DUEL

Postby craig911 » Sat May 13, 2006 3:37 am

Ok...I'll try my hand then.
The everlasting joy of a girl's tender smile, it makes you want to jump for joy-- even in denial , the love of a mother the sweetness of her happiness,every single thought in you came from her joy and distress, your blood and veins are a result from your parents totally, don't fuss around don't make a sound just because they're old , because they can sue ye

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And another...
Comic relief is my best friend they free me much from stress, I take a look and read it well as it adds up to my best, I act random that is true and I have gained recognition, if I didn't do so will it still be the same? That is my new mission. I was born into this world not knowing what to do, today it is still much the same as I still not know---oh poo
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Postby miss redhead » Sat May 13, 2006 3:38 am

come on guys, you're both good at poetry
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Postby Mirak's Mod Ghost » Sat May 13, 2006 3:39 am

thet was a good one, try this:

What is the music?
That's something you must feel, is not something
you can explain but then, what is the music?
The music is Joy, the music is love,
the music is fear, the music is doubt,
the music is passion, the music is life,
is the Musse that invites you, to touch it
softly, in my harp, sometimes sad,
the death doesn't exist, if the music is there,
is not clear, yet it is pure


No wait, i'll tell you the thruth, this one sucks, i cant concentrate, i'll go refill my imagination via sleepin...
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Re: POETRY DUEL

Postby craig911 » Sat May 13, 2006 3:42 am

Thanks for the compliment miss redhead.

G'night Mir@k.

Now another.
Miss Redhead is a friend I made just yesterday, but even so she is a good one , even to things seemingly disarray, I thank you so for being a friend , thank you very much , now if you need help a hand I shall lend , you got me in your clutch.
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Re: POETRY DUEL

Postby miss redhead » Sat May 13, 2006 3:46 am

Aw, that's nice ^_^
and you're welcome.
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Re: POETRY DUEL

Postby craig911 » Sat May 13, 2006 3:47 am

^_^
Should I make more or wait for Mir@k? >.@
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Postby miss redhead » Sat May 13, 2006 3:49 am

Well make some more and post them when Mir@k's back.
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Re: POETRY DUEL

Postby craig911 » Sat May 13, 2006 3:51 am

That would mean not posting or making any.
I can almost instantly think of a poem, I just need a topic or something.
Go send me a pm like "Cheese" and I'll make a poem out of it. lol
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Postby Lotus Flower » Sat May 13, 2006 3:56 am

Though they're really just random rhymes put together :P
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Postby craig911 » Sat May 13, 2006 3:58 am

Meh Bards rhyme a lot.
Bard= Poet that Rhymes---only rhymes.
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Postby Lotus Flower » Sat May 13, 2006 4:25 am

A Bard is a poet, that traditionally recited epics... Shakespeare himself was called "The Bard". Only the bad bards would use only rhyme~
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Re: POETRY DUEL

Postby craig911 » Sat May 13, 2006 4:30 am

~~Yes, yes, true , but have you been to Scotland~~
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Postby miss redhead » Sat May 13, 2006 7:55 am

I haven't.

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Is Mir@k back?
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Re: POETRY DUEL

Postby craig911 » Sat May 13, 2006 8:00 am

I have.
Uncle told me stuff 'bout the bards there.
Interesting.
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Postby miss redhead » Sat May 13, 2006 8:05 am

So did you win the duel Craig?
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Re: POETRY DUEL

Postby craig911 » Sat May 13, 2006 8:09 am

Not yet, still waiting for Mir@k.
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Postby miss redhead » Sat May 13, 2006 8:11 am

Oh ok. I guess he's still sleeping.
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Re: POETRY DUEL

Postby craig911 » Sat May 13, 2006 8:12 am

Yep, I can wait though.
Dammit I can't post as quickly because my brother is forcing me to play Fable. >.@
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Postby Relick » Sat May 13, 2006 8:15 am

As Clara was walking down the street, the men began to flock.
Her eyes, her hair, her tiny waist with skin pale and inked.
And then at night, the bathroom door she entered, then she locked.
She felt her beauty leaving her, so by the bathroom sink,
She drained her ugliness through her mouth, she did not even think.
Again and again, her days went on, turning her life into a mess,
Clara did not walk that street again, she’d starved herself to death
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Re: POETRY DUEL

Postby craig911 » Sat May 13, 2006 8:16 am

That's deep...
Awesome job Relick. ^_^
Since Mir@k isn't posting here and isn't online I guess you could post your poems.
But if he gets angry I'll take the blame k? ^_^
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Postby Relick » Sat May 13, 2006 8:19 am

Perhaps we could make this into a game? A poetry competition! Everyone posts a couple of poems and then chooses their best one to enter into the duel. Once everyone who wants to enter has decided on their entry, the other forumers (or whorumers, since we're all forum whores here XD) can vote on which one they like best.
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Postby miss redhead » Sat May 13, 2006 8:20 am

Good idea! :)
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Re: POETRY DUEL

Postby craig911 » Sat May 13, 2006 8:21 am

Verry good.
Now all we need is for Mir@k to agree.
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Postby miss redhead » Sat May 13, 2006 8:23 am

I won't be participating though.
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