Ku Ku Ku \(-^.^-)/ wrote:well i dont relly know how the hell do u find something in a bathroom. no hints and wat not. its not like u can actually see the key. or r u suppose to make it up.
First off you use leet/aim speak, thats just gay. You dont use "" when you character talks either. Added after 2 minutes:
Bryan woke up with the world looking sideways. He moved his eyes from left to right to try and get his bearings. It turns out his way laying on his side his face pressed against the floor of the bathroom. He sat up and and looked around his hair dishevled and his clothes wrinkled. He noticed there was other people in the room along with him. "Where are we?" He asked slowly the knock out drugs still having a slight effect on his body.